tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post1572352373341187285..comments2023-10-30T11:11:59.695+03:00Comments on ZB: His love life- A storyZBhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02447730465256670305noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-29725012081549020562009-08-02T19:37:35.894+03:002009-08-02T19:37:35.894+03:00ZB have u read my story on love?
http://acuppacon...ZB have u read my story on love? <br />http://acuppaconversation.blogspot.com/2009/04/totally-taboo-part-1.html<br /><br />i really wonder what u would think of it.coffeeismypoisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05421534537554930676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-7913085676636225302009-08-02T19:25:26.451+03:002009-08-02T19:25:26.451+03:00sigh.men.women.miscommunication.
sorry i cudnt re...sigh.men.women.miscommunication. <br />sorry i cudnt read ur blog earlier... catching up slowly...good work pal.coffeeismypoisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05421534537554930676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-23265702752940211452009-08-01T10:50:44.272+03:002009-08-01T10:50:44.272+03:00Well,you've got some obsession with this name ...Well,you've got some obsession with this name arun or is that ur real name??ve seen a mention,in previous posts too..<br />and abt the post..it really happens every time..the testosterone driven men go for girls with looks..and later find the real care that some hideous one gave,haunting..<br /><br />btw,were u by any chance,a mech engr??Gayathrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00939303706866631897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-67379150343230734442009-07-28T16:23:44.254+03:002009-07-28T16:23:44.254+03:00There u are... completely summed up "MAN"...There u are... completely summed up "MAN" in a nutshell! When someone is there for u, you can't appreciate her. When u think u are abt to lose her, u go nuts and ur jealous possessive mind conjures up all kinds of irrational thoughts. But in the end, you never are able to find the guts to simply "go all the way"! And they say women are the "weaker" sex! I bet it was a man who said this... to cover up his own insecurities! Huhhh!<br /><br />My angry outburst proves it is written very well... but I beg you yaar... write happy stuff in future... there's already too much of reality in life. Such painful pieces only highlight the darkness of night... would be so good to read something refreshing... something that reminds one of the beauty of the rainbows...Chickyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05046525853235669617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-18582523924806107962009-07-28T06:56:41.598+03:002009-07-28T06:56:41.598+03:00eh ZB: i read this on Sunday but cldnt comment the...eh ZB: i read this on Sunday but cldnt comment then...liked your post and had a good laugh at the "looser-like-attitude" of the protagonist. :D..no i think i felt a little more for Diplai even...i mean i liked you narration...pretty much as alwayssss. :D:DSupriya Duttahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01503551055190735344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-52936316146691062982009-07-27T19:50:56.915+03:002009-07-27T19:50:56.915+03:00It feels more wonderful when even u cant separate ...It feels more wonderful when even u cant separate reality from fiction.<br /><br />Truth is stranger than fiction!Lone Survivorhttp://lostbutsurvived.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-41256338608064966002009-07-27T12:01:45.576+03:002009-07-27T12:01:45.576+03:00Sitting in my office.I hurridly read the story and...Sitting in my office.I hurridly read the story and in between got confused between rahul and Arun..Will read it again after a while.:danamikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14216661235464503965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-77615031055601552412009-07-27T04:59:11.811+03:002009-07-27T04:59:11.811+03:00the confusion within ourselves about what we want ...the confusion within ourselves about what we want is ver nicely expressed ....very well written story , well captured emotions...but why neo-classical? its an ages old dilema ,as far as i see it...not wanting what we get and realising its value after we lose it.... as for the autobiographical bit ... hmmm, you are the rahul in the story ,:)wandering thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11570153523438097108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-80621583320457435082009-07-27T04:56:32.705+03:002009-07-27T04:56:32.705+03:00This comment has been removed by the author.wandering thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11570153523438097108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-16045599666838908142009-07-26T19:00:52.409+03:002009-07-26T19:00:52.409+03:00@LEB: You are right, its very predictable and comm...@LEB: You are right, its very predictable and common bolliwoodish story. It was just a writing practice, experimenting with treatment. Thanks :)<br /><br />@Gymnast:hehe add that to ur dictionary. <br /><br />Arun is love sick, to quote Garcia Marquez **that lovesickness is a literal illness, a disease comparable to cholera**....<br /><br />@Sujata:Thanks, welcome back. But who cheats? Ok, the last part where rahul cheats, it happens all around us, all the time. I know atleast 5 people, who have been dumped by their bf/gf for a better looking or richer person. So many time people just get into a relationship for the heck of it, once the thrill is out its BREAKUP TIME.:)ZBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02447730465256670305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-41136603259730024252009-07-26T12:41:46.427+03:002009-07-26T12:41:46.427+03:00Like the new look of the blog and the changes made...Like the new look of the blog and the changes made..its a sad story but a very realsitic one..do people cheat or are they just circumstances? I could never understand that a guy/girl will actually plan and cheat somebody..i dont think that happens to normal ppl..i think people just fall out of love..sujata senguptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13101153080266818022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-40322768316026833832009-07-26T11:30:30.937+03:002009-07-26T11:30:30.937+03:00Neo realism ? My god ! Heard of neo-palladianism ,...Neo realism ? My god ! Heard of neo-palladianism , neo - classicism .. and now i add neo-realism to my dictionary.<br /><br />Sad story , ZB. I have seem many Aruns in my college as well.<br /><br />Strange are the workings of human mind. Forever imbalanced. Perhaps Arun should have been a little more balanced.Gymnasthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05468640996264277554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-88775133236506792212009-07-26T03:02:03.277+03:002009-07-26T03:02:03.277+03:00Well done ... a little predictable though ... mayb...Well done ... a little predictable though ... maybe because it is neo-realistic ...keep up the good work !!le embrouille blogueurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01225590857782317110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-22692597977545192242009-07-25T23:52:14.913+03:002009-07-25T23:52:14.913+03:00@Jyothi: who isnt desperate for LOVE. If someone s...@Jyothi: who isnt desperate for LOVE. If someone says so, probably he/she is lying. Before marriage we want to be loved by a beautiful specimen of the opposite sex. If no, then something he/she isnt normal.<br />Love happens is an old CLICHE. it can also be planned. I wooed my wife, and she used to HATE me. I planned and step by step wooed her. Does love really just hAPPENs? In movies may be.<br /><br />Haha, you are largely influenced by fairy tales, grow up, life isnt a fairy tale.<br /><br />Re:**Time doesn't heal completely.Pain stays on forever in some corner of the heart.**, i dont completely agree with you. Not all pain remains. OK, some pains do last but very few. My 95 % of pain is nomore a PAIN. I laugh at some of the so called PAINFUL incidences of the past. Dont you? Tell me....:)<br /><br />For once i thought you read the post completely, and not get influenced by others comment and comment. Thanks :DZBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02447730465256670305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-74398509143149540582009-07-25T23:36:43.526+03:002009-07-25T23:36:43.526+03:00@Nona: Thanks, i am glad.
It was not convincing? ...@Nona: Thanks, i am glad.<br /><br />It was not convincing? Why? Love in real life, is like an addiction. Once a person tastes blood(Love), she/he would chase it for sure, for life. Arun wanted a replacement for Deepali. He was restless, only a replacement could get his restless mind to rest.A solace for his mind. Why was it not convincing?<br /><br />We Indians are too politically correct. Its time we discard statements like, Love happens its destiny, First life is true love( Darn, i dont even remember my first love, probably in when i was in LKG?), A woman is never desperate for love, a woman never has lust or desire, love is blind, it can never be planned. All are cliches and according to me its all bullshit. :))<br /><br /><br />@P: Now, thats what i call neo-realism. Thanks for sharing. Life is never politically correct. we all stray, we all lust for that skirt with Sexy Legs thing. dont we, we are all humans.i know a lot of people who two time. Thanks:))ZBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02447730465256670305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-1558440141646556222009-07-25T23:28:02.758+03:002009-07-25T23:28:02.758+03:00@Panaroma: Thanks, i am glad that you liked. :)
@...@Panaroma: Thanks, i am glad that you liked. :)<br /><br />@ Abstract:Thanks, hey, dont wait for LOVE TO HAPPEN. It Never happens automatically. Thats only in movies, in real world( neo-realism remember) it has to be planned, and executed, a'la MBA style.Try locate the SUBJECT, plan you attack and then wait. If was meant for you, she would come back. Ask me, if you want more lessons, i would be glad.i have tremendous experience, hehe:))ZBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02447730465256670305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-41510699032795340542009-07-25T23:24:39.806+03:002009-07-25T23:24:39.806+03:00This comment has been removed by the author.ZBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02447730465256670305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-55015809958716467162009-07-25T23:17:46.260+03:002009-07-25T23:17:46.260+03:00@Choco: Thanks buddy, pleasure was entirely mine. ...@Choco: Thanks buddy, pleasure was entirely mine. :)<br /><br />@Neha: Thanks buddy. Why not, you could also write. Just remember some incidence in your life which moved you, and search around how you could connect and make a tale. Dont worry about it being politically correct, or being a story which doesnt end in happy ending. I too like stories which have HAPPY ENDING, but alas, life is nor fair. :)ZBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02447730465256670305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-60741660300416865982009-07-25T23:14:33.652+03:002009-07-25T23:14:33.652+03:00@Manish: Ok so had a stint with neo-realism, wow, ...@Manish: Ok so had a stint with neo-realism, wow, thats good. Thanks buddy:)<br /><br />@Ivy: I agree with you, **why cnt people be more forthright wid thr feelings?** , if would be so , i would have ended up with 3-4 wives and few extramarital relations. hehe, just kidding.:))ZBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02447730465256670305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-39060891295945930642009-07-25T22:44:40.760+03:002009-07-25T22:44:40.760+03:00AAh!!
you started with a love triangle and ended w...AAh!!<br />you started with a love triangle and ended with a double tragedy!! <br />i have had friends who were two timed... and BELIEVE me they regretted! my girl friends are feisty! :PPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10505137423128823662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-60023225162152668442009-07-25T22:42:10.183+03:002009-07-25T22:42:10.183+03:00The story was sad. But your writing was good.
Th...The story was sad. But your writing was good. <br /><br />The part where Arun runs after Devika was not very convincing. As a writer, you may have a reason to make the character behave that way. But as a reader, I was not able to find it. It is kinda written in between the lines. :)Nonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13892851938328826870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-40598388622808439432009-07-25T22:25:17.183+03:002009-07-25T22:25:17.183+03:00Hey ZB,
Cool story man. It happens all the time an...Hey ZB,<br />Cool story man. It happens all the time and I wonder when will it end. We keep waiting for the Miss universe of our dreams and she never comes. I am still looking and I hope I shall find mine. If not there is always an arrangedmarriage and another girl to listen to all my stories of the past.The Unsure Ascetichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10196315126703878175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-21501776190029536552009-07-25T21:35:16.938+03:002009-07-25T21:35:16.938+03:00Good story and I liked the end...it was a surprise...Good story and I liked the end...it was a surprise twist...didn't expect that one. Well done:)The Panoramahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17919885693479046926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-27299877754160681192009-07-25T21:34:43.067+03:002009-07-25T21:34:43.067+03:00Was that the ending?Don't they meet. Of course...Was that the ending?Don't they meet. Of course not, this is not a fairy tale right? But tell me something. Deepali goes after Rahul when she doesn't get Arun's attention. Why was she so desperate to be in love. Love happens yaar. Its never planned. And if it was genuine, they will meet again.Just like in fairy tales.<br /><br />Time doesn't heal completely.Pain stays on forever in some corner of the heart.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2559344407876332504.post-27061011653664107742009-07-25T21:14:29.444+03:002009-07-25T21:14:29.444+03:00Zillionbig, the end made the whole story beautiful...Zillionbig, the end made the whole story beautiful...i knw it was not a very happy ending, but thts the beauty of ur story telling according to me...i really like ur style...and the day i get sme spare time, i would love to read ur older posts...wish i could also come up with something like this...very impressive post :)Nehahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12210124858747262151noreply@blogger.com